1. What I liked most about my text is ...
2. What I liked least about my text is ...
Here are my suggestions for improving the:
I should have used one of the 11 ways to introduce an essay that we learned in class.
4. thesis statement
I should bring up my subject in a more creative way.
5. topic sentence of each paragraph
I can look up for previous examples to make sure that my topic sentences contain everything.
6. content of the text
Unfortunately, I have a bad habit of not doing a plan before writing. That technique might help me to improve my paragraph's content.
7. organization of the text
I believe that my text is well organized, except for the conclusion since I didn't write a thesis statement.
9. sentence style of the text
I might use every now and then a figure of speech.
I could highlight the words that I often use in my text and try to find synonyms in a Thesaurus.
Unfortunately, I didn't get any feedback on my grammar. Consequently, I'm not sure just yet whether it needs improvement or not.
Rereading my text and looking for some of the words in a dictionary.
My conclusion was the weakest link in my text because it lacks a thesis statement. Writing one the next time, would of course improve my mark.